〔原文〕We met at the schoolgate and went there together early in the morning.
〔修正〕Early in the morningwe met at the school gate and went there together.
〔原文〕The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.
〔修正〕Hearing the bad news， the young man couldn’t help crying.
〔原文〕I met him in thestreet yesterday.
〔修正〕It was in the streetthat I met him yesterday.
It was yesterday that I met him in thestreet.
He sat in a chair with a newspaper in thehand.
Satisfied with the result，He decided to go on with a new experiment.
Only in this way can we achieve our goal.
Never before have I seen such a wonderfulfilm.
Not only should we study in the college,but also learn how to be a decent person.
If so，victory will be ours.
You can make some changes wherevernecessary.
〔原文〕He stopped us halfan hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.
〔修正〕He stopped us halfan hour ago and made us catch the next offender.
〔原文〕We had a short rest.Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.
Some told stories. Some played chess.
〔修正〕After a short rest， we had great fun singing and dancing， telling jokes and playing chess.注意使用不同长度的句子，要结合使用，不能只用短句或只用长句。
①递进: then(然后)， besides(还有)， furthermore(而且)， moreover(此外)等。
②转折: however(然而)， but(但是)， on the contrary (相反)， after all(毕竟)等。
③总结: finally(最后)， at last(最后)， in brief(总之)， in conclusion(最后)等。
④强调: indeed(确实)， certainly(一定)， surely(确定)， above all(尤其)等。
⑤对比: in the same way(同样地)， just as(正如)， on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。
相似的比较： similarly, in thesame manner 相反的比较： on the otherhand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on thecontrary, compared with …,
〔原文〕A new railway isbeing built in my hometown.
〔修正〕A new railway isunder construction in my hometown.
〔原文〕I like reading whilemy brother likes watching television.
〔修正〕I like reading whilemy brother enjoys watching television.
I like reading while watching televisionappeals to my brother.
1、 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……（比如说到和谐社会 All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should buildour society a harmonious society.）
2、 Therefore, it’s not difficultto draw a conclusion that……
3、 As a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.（我们必须采取一些有效的措施来做些什么）
4、 From what has been discussed above , we may conclude that ……
5、 Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we candraw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
It is alleged that(据说)
In my view, both sides are partly right(两方面都部分的正确)
As far as I am concerned(就我而言)
As regards to me
My own point of view is that……
Personally, I believe that……
My experience tells me that……
The invention of the handset, I dare tosay, turns out to be a tremendous hit.
The application of web sites, I dare tosay, turns out to be a greatly hit.
It comes as no surprise that Chineseeconomy becomes increasingly hot.
Other individuals, however, take theattitude that……
（错误的观点）sb is under thefalse belief that……
The table shows\indicates\ reveals that ……（表明、暗示、揭示）
According to the statistics showing in thatgraph, we can easliy see\found……（根据表中的数据，我们可以看见，发现）
As seen from the chart/ As is portrayed inthe picture
Sales went into a slight decline=salesdeclined slightly(小幅下降)
Sales declineddramatically/sharply/greatly/hugely (大幅下降)
A brief glimpse at our campus (thepicture/cartoon/caricature) vividly shows that mobile phone, becoming more andmore prevalent.
the machine\the device 代替 computer
handset代替 cell phone
*The Middle Kingdom代替 China
intensely\crucially important代替 very important (it is crucially important that the benefits ofcollective be on our priority.)
current(currently) 代替 now
growing individuals代替 more and more people
individuals/ characters/ folks 代替 people, persons
positive, favorable, rosy(美好的), promising(有希望的), perfect,pleasurable, excellent, outstanding, 代替 good
unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill 代替 bad
an army of, an ocean of, a multitude of 代替 many, a lot of
take the attitude that, hold the view that,it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that 代替 think
affair, business, matter 代替 thing
for my part, from my own perspective 代替 in my opinion
beneficial, rewarding 代替 helpful
exceedingly, extremely, intensely 代替 very
pour attention into代替 pay attention to
bear in mind that代替remember
enjoy, possess代替 have
to name only a few/ as an example代替for example/ instance
老年人the old\elderly\aged\ elderly population\ senior citizens
年轻人youth\youngster\young adults\ adolescent
网吧cyber café网虫mouse potato 电视迷couch potato
农村rural 郊区suburban 城里urban
双赢a win-win situation 双输 a lose-lose situation
建设有中国特色的社会主义buildsocialism with Chinese characteristics ,form a economic system with Chinesecharacteristics
I would appreciate it very much If you ……
I am thrilled to receive your mail.
Looking forward to a prompt response.
1、 have growing respect for 越来越重视
Coincident with the fast growing economy,China has growing respect for protecting the environment and controllingpopulation. 随着经济的迅速发展，中国也越来越重视环境保护和控制人口了。
2、 enable sb to do sth （使某人可以做某事）
It enable us to build a harmonious society.
3、 另外 In addition/ Additionally/ on top of that
Additionally, there is another reason forthe appearance of this phenomenon.(现象)
The real power resides in the people.(真正的权力属于人民)
We must fight against the bureaucracy inorder to improve governmental work.(为了提高政府部门的工作效率，我们必须与官僚作风作斗争。)
Litter by little, our knowledge will beenriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.(慢慢的，我们的知识会充实，我们的视野会开阔。)
As a classic proverb goes that no gardenhas no weeds.(常言道，任何事物都有两面的。)也可以用 every sword has two edges. Everything has both dark sides andbright sides.
Taiwan is an integral part of China.(台湾是中国不可分割的一部分。)
Coincident with the fast growing nationaleconomy, there exists an unfavorable坏的现象 (favorable好的现象) andprevalent phenomenon in China. It is estimated that (相关数据，例如：eight out of ten individuals possess a handset十个人中有八个有手机了).
Why have there been so many (某种现象)? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. Firstly /in the firstplace (原因一). Besides,/secondly(原因二). On top of that/additionally (原因三). the main cause of (某种现象) is due to(最主要原因). It is high time that something weredone upon it. For one thing, (解决办法一). On theother hand, (解决办法二). All thesemeasures will certainly reduce the number of (某种现象).